There was a cake store on the sidewalk where there were lots of people were lining up outside. I learned that this store is called Lady M. It is located near Bryant Park on 40th street and between 5th and 6th avenue. There were many flavours and I got green tea layered cake and strawberry shortcake cream cake. They tasted very very good!
When I was eating the cake, there were lots of pigeons staring at me and walking towards me creepily like giant monsters. They must be jealous. I enjoyed eating the very yummy cake!
Congratulation, Edmund, for your first article!
Instead of simply saying how tasty the cake is, you use creepy pigeons to pass the message. Well written!